Feedback From Rough Cut Showing

I showed the rough cut of my trailer to a group of people which were relevant to my chosen target audience and asked them to write down comments about both the positive aspects and also points which could be improved.
I have found this to be really helpful as it allows me to focus on points which I may not have noticed before and it gives me opinions from different perspective rather than my own.
These are the comments I received from the showing which I then scanned: